Harry, Severus and the surprise [ENG]

Titel: Harry, Severus and the surprise
Språk: Engelska
Typ av text: Fanfiction
Antal kapitel hittills: 3 (denna siffra ändras hela tiden)
Färdigskriven: Nej
Rating: PG
Beskrivning: Harrys liv är påväg att förändras, än en gång. Severus dyker upp i hans liv med en stor hemlighet. För det första, var inte Severus död? För det andra, hur ska livet fortsätta efter detta avslöjande?

Denna fanfiction är skriven på engelska och jag kan medge att jag inte är någon expert inom det engelska språket, därför ber jag er att påpeka eventuella stavfel/gramatikfel/övriga språkfel. Ge gärna konstruktiv kritik, positiv och negativ. Jag tar även emot synpunkter! Enjoy!

Chapter 1 - The Inception

Severus
Severus was going to meet him, he had to. He walked by the ocean and he was thinking, about the meeting, how would it go, what would he say? He didn’t even know if Harry wanted to see him, but it was foolish of him not to try to talk to Harry. Plenty of things needed to be said and Severus wasn’t able to keep them inside any longer. Severus couldn’t stop it anymore; the tears were streaming down his face. Tears of love, pain, regret and sorrow.

Harry
They all knew that Severus was dead, Harry saw him die. Harry had missed him since the day he died. Severus wasn’t the right one to die; he was just trying to save everybody from Lord Voldemort by fooling him. These days Harry didn’t think of Severus that often, just a few times every week when something reminded him about Severus. Initially Harry couldn’t stop thinking about him and that he was dead. All these years at Hogwarts Harry didn’t know who he really was and he regret that he didn’t try to find out. Severus spent his life in grief and pain and Harry was just mean to him. Harry sat on his and Ginny’s bed and he sighed. Ginny didn’t know what pain Harry went through. Harry didn’t think that she would understand. But Ginny was also in pain. She wasn’t the same since Fred died, but who was? Nothing was the same anymore. In the meantime Harry was happy, he and Ginny had wonderful kids, James Sirius and Albus Severus. They were expecting another child, a little girl.

Severus
He was soon about to arrive. He took the last steps and stood in front of Harry’s front door. It was a white and glowing door and the house was huge and gorgeous. Severus knew the minute he saw the house and the garden that Harry had children. He wondered, was it with Ginny? He believed so. Severus smiled and felt a wonderful feeling while he was standing there. But he couldn’t wait to see Harry any longer; he took one more step and knocked on the door.

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Tack! Tänkte lägga upp nästa kapitel typ imorgon eller nått. Vill inte lägga upp för mycket på en gång!

Hehe, ok, då har man något att se fram emot imorgon.

Great!

GAH. Måste. få. läsa. mer! please

Chapter 2 - Surreal

Harry
Someone knocked on the door and Harry flew out of his bed. Who was it? Ron and Hermione didn’t knock that hard, the kids were inside the house and the neighbors had never been here before. Harry knew that Ginny wasn’t expecting someone, so… who was it? He went down to the hall and opened the door slowly. A man dressed in black stood there with his back turned to Harry, but Harry saw who it was. He couldn’t believe it, this wasn’t happening, it can’t be him! Harry’s thoughts yelled at him inside his head and he couldn’t concentrate. It was… it was, Severus, Severus Snape.

Severus
Severus just stood there, he was so nervous and his heart was freaking out, it was beating so hard inside his chest. He was a coward; he couldn’t turn around and look into Harry’s eyes. Oh, those eyes, a copy of Lily’s… He knew that Harry recognized him because he heard that Harry took some extra breaths. What was he going to do now and what was Harry going to say? Severus did almost regret that he came here, he wasn’t ready. He couldn’t talk to Harry, he was so scared. It was so many years since last time they saw each other. It was that night, when Voldemort killed a lot of people, during the war. Severus was dying and gave Harry his tears before he died in Harrys arms. What would Harry think of him? Harry knew everything about him, he had seen the memories, he knew more than anyone. After a few seconds Severus stopped his thoughts, took a deep breath and turned around. “Hi…”

Harry
Harry couldn’t speak; he didn’t know what to believe. This wasn’t real. Severus was dead, how could he be here!? Harry had destroyed the Resurrection Stone many years ago and without that stone it was impossible to recall the dead people. Harry looked at Severus one more time before he started talking.
- Ehm… Hi, he said.

Severus
- I’m so glad to see you and you probably are confused right know. I know that you think I’m dead, but obviously I’m not. I’ll start with this, to tell you why I’m alive and why I didn’t come back earlier, Severus said.
- Ehm, well, OK. Harry couldn’t speak properly and he just stood there, looking like a fool.
- I knew that Voldemort thought that the Elder Wand belonged to me and I knew that he was going to kill me. I also knew that he couldn’t do it by himself, I mean to much to him and believe it or not, he had feelings after all. I took a wild guess when I did this, because it was Nagini who killed me, but I wasn’t sure that it would be Nagini. But, it was the only one I could think of, so… I created a potion. The potion I made was going to protect me from snakes and if a snake would try to kill me, my heart was going to stop, but in a few minutes my heart was beating again. So, here I am, alive.
- I don’t know what to say. But… why did you come here right now? Why didn’t you come back directly after the war? Harry said.
- I couldn’t come back, it was too risky and many people had died. I’m a coward Harry and I was too scared to return and I knew that many people would hate me. I did horrible things at Hogwarts, when I was the principal and I knew that many people didn’t want to see me ever again. But now I’m back and that’s because of you. I need to tell you something and I can’t keep it inside of me anymore Severus said.

Harry
Harry was so confused; he didn’t know what to say. Everything was weird and he couldn’t believe this was actually happening. It seemed surreal and complicated. Harry had missed Severus so much; he had even named his child after him. Severus was an important person in his life and now he was back. Could this really be true?

YAY! Jag har helt ärligt längtat efter ett nytt kapitel av denna fanfiction. Äntligen! Spännande btw. ^^

Åh, tack! Tog lite längre tid än jag förväntade mig. Brist på inspiration får jag skylla på. Kul att du gillar den! :-)

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